Link here for this week's WoW Notre Dame de Paris
I don't know why such a grim story came to mind...
She slid into her
head, dredging memories from her past as she gazed at the flickering flames .
The thick sandstone walls were cold and still, she shivered slightly and
wrapped her arms around her shoulders. The world had changed – what had once
been condoned by silence was no longer ignored, but that was of little
consolation to her. As she knelt, she wondered why she had – kneeling felt like
what she should do in such a place, but prayer would not come to her.
She saw her young
self, innocent earnest face above white robes as she followed the holy man,
walking in his footsteps and self opened in trust. She fleetingly felt the
confusion again, before she closed down the memory.
She stood slowly and
turned toward the back of the church. For the last time, she gazed at the
beautiful glass windows, bathed in candlelight. She thought of the implications
of her next move, of the telling and the consequences. Wondering if she had the
courage to go through with it, she knew that she must.
This is terrifying. And well written.
ReplyDeleteKate,
ReplyDeleteOh my. I loved the simplicity of it, the sparseness. It's amazing that you can tell a complete story in just a few paragraphs.
--FC
I'm filling in so many of my own details here I almost want to write the rest of the story myself! :)
ReplyDeleteAmazing how you did that - I wonder if I'm right about what happened and what will happen or if I've got it completely wrong ...
Thanks Sarah, I sort of hope this is not your story, cos it is a bit sad, but strong as well?
ReplyDeleteI guess the story is whatever you find it means to you!
Wow, I agree with FC. You told a lot in such a short piece. You have a knack for this, I think. I have noticed it in your writing before. It is strange how our writing can take us to a dark place, even when we don't expect it to.
ReplyDeleteI'd love for you to work on an ongoing piece for WoW. You say above that you like comments as they help you to develop your writing. I think you do the short burst of stream of consciousness so well that I'd be interested to see how you go on a continuing piece...Of course, only if you want to...!